Reviewing the Situation for Friend Donald

Cornish Sonnet

Reviewing the situation.

On looking back now I am old.
I see the errors which I made
I watch as memories unfold
but they no longer trouble me.
The times I failed to make the grade
I tried but unsuccessfully.

I can forgive myself I find
although I still have some regrets.
I have attained a peace of mind
Old age has taught me tolerance
of life's triumphs and life's upsets.
You win or lose: You take your chance.

On looking back now I am old
I can forgive myself I find.

6-Jan-09

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Reviews

[clau]

I enjoy reading your work, as usual I really liked this one. I can relate to it, and I'm sure many people can.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

how can you keep your writing flawless... I enjoy your reads Bless you