Theoretical

a poem

Theoretically


God instructs me in the thunder
and speaks to me in wind and rain.
He corrects me when I blunder
and sets me on the path again.

My God expects that I will try
to live my life the way I should.
I sometimes fail I can't deny.
Because I have misunderstood

that the temptations offered me.
Are lessons from which I should learn.
I have the choice my will is free.
All men are tempted in their turn

Though men should know instinctively
to listen to that still small voice
which whispers to them quietly.
When they are forced to make a choice.

My God can speak to me direct.
He needs no intermediaries
Which is the reason I reject.
All of religions theories.

What I believe holds true for me
although it may seem wrong to you.
Its just another theory
you can reject if you wish to.

.13-Jan-09http:// blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers

Reviews

[Carrie Lynn]

You are a man of much wisdom, Poeticipier. Are you published? I am sorry I have not read your profile page. I guess I need to. I love the way you write.

[Donald Meikle]

Sounds awe fully familiar.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Well spoken... Nice write and I choose not to reject it thanks for sharing