Fare you well

sonnet

Fare you well

Fly free proud spirit on your way.
Towards the truth you sought to find,
No need to tarry or delay.
You know I'll follow on behind.

The bonds of love death cannot break
For love will last eternally.
We'll meet again make no mistake.
I will rejoin you presently.

We've lived and loved and died before.
I have no doubt we will again.
Each life we learn a little more
although each parting is a pain.

With my blessings go your way
until my call comes I must stay.

22/04/2009
http: blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers

Reviews

[shythatway]

This was so beautiful, and I didn't really find it sad - just full of hope and peace. It must be so much easier to let go if you can look at things this way. Thank you for sharing.

[A.M.P.]

Very nice! Full of love and goodbyes, with the promise of a reunion. I love the thought that no matter what happens, we will see each other again someday. This was a really beautiful piece! I am definitely adding this to my library. =)

[Cherry Berry]

This was a beautiful sonnet. Sad, broken hearted, loving, and goodbye all rolled into one well done piece. Beautiful.
xox
Cherri

[bob, small b. aka invs]

very nicely done. as we get older these partings happen more and more. it's nice to think of reunions.

[Anastasia Starlena]

That was sucha wonderful beautiful piece. Very much reminds me of a blessing.

[Thunderlyrics]

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

FULL OF HOPE AMIDST LONGING TO BE TOGETHER!!
WELL DONE

[Elliot Kyron]

Beautiful piece. The description, flow and wording is gorgeous.
I absolutely loved it.

[silent-tear]

This is beautiful ... perfect =o)

have a wonderful day

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