Planning stage  corrected version

Planning stage corrected version

A Poem by Poeticpiers
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Baroque sonnet

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Planning stage.

This garden is not as it should be. It's sad to see
neglected now and over grown. It was once known
To house a rather special stone which stood alone.
Which is not where it used to be as you can see.
This garden suffers from neglect but I expect.
It can be made beautiful once more, we can restore
it to how it was to before. To be once more
A quiet pace to meditate, its not too late.
Despite its neglected state I cannot wait
to start the transformation .It must be done.
I'm happy to anticipate though I must wait.
Before I can contemplate the finished state
of my own haven in the sun. Not yet begun
because I procrastinate ,planning is such fun

Baroque sonnet
Alexandrine meter
6 metric feet or 12 syllables per line

Rhyme pattern
abba
cddc
eef
ggf
11/05/2009

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© 2009 Poeticpiers


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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..