Inappropriate for Bro Sal

small but heart felt rant

Inappropriate

Wake up it's time to take your pill.
She whispers in a dulcet tone.
She would be dead if looks could kill.
Why can't she just leave me alone?

I was sleeping peacefully
enjoying a delightful dream.
When she disturbed me needlessly
To fulfil some treatment scheme.

Woken to take a sleeping pill.
To me shows utter idiocy
Displaying a distinct lack of skill
in people paid to care for me.

It seems to me stupidity
to take a pill to help me sleep
if I'm asleep to waken me.
Enough to make an angel weep.

I'm no angel so I curse.
As I have every right to do
the stupid system not the nurse.
She does what she is told to do.

07/06/2009
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Reviews

[wolfshrew]

i read this to my kitten. we both really enjoyed it.