Reviewing the Situation for M lady Emily

off the wall sonnet

Reviewing the situation 2009

Moonlight on the water gleaming, nightime is the time for dreaming.
Lovers walking hand in hand, creating their own wonderland.
Sharing dreams as lovers do. dreams are better shared by two.
Sharing dreams discovering togetherness means everything
They are too young to understand fate can step in and take command.
They cannot do what they want to. It's very sad but all too true
Circumstances altering quickly changing everything.
No longer strolling hand in hand, fate has destroyed their fairyland.
They've grown apart as couples do. What they have lost they can't renew.
Although they once shared everything, that's gone beyond recovering.
Their hopes and dreams they built on sand, without foundations cannot stand.
It's not an easy thing to do they have no choice but to review
the situation once again. .Though breaking up will cause you pain.
The dreams you shared were not in vain. You're free to search for love again.
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09/06/2009

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Reviews

[Omri F.K]

a great sonata. I liked the rhyming, although in some spots its a bit off
still a work well done

[Emily B]

Sometimes I dream right in the middle of the day. That's when the fairy wonderland seems nearest anyway . . . beautiful words.