House hunting

House hunting

A Poem by Poeticpiers
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narrative verse

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House hunting
 
Some houses seem to welcome you.
You feel at ease immediately.
It is if the walls recall
What happened here and store it all.
 
The triumphs and the tragedies
Firm memories of past events
Have been recorded faithfully
Each and every incident.
 
If you are at all sensitive
You tune into the ambience,
 the positive and negative.
Impinge somehow so you can sense.
 
That something dreadful happened here
It may be faint it may be strong
 but it affects the atmosphere.
You know at once this house is wrong
 
 
You’re certain that it will not do.
You have no doubt, no doubt at all
You know the house is telling you
 it has no choice it must recall
 
All the unpleasant memories
 which it has stored so faithfully.
For decades perhaps centuries.
You choose to leave immediately.
 
The next house which you choose to view
 affects you in a different way.
It seems prepared to welcome you.
You can decide without delay
 
It is not hard to make the choice
This is the house that you will buy
You listen to that house’s voice
because you know it cannot lie.
 
You go ahead complete the deal
prepare to move in right away
You are content because you feel
 that everything has gone your way.
 
You know that it was meant to be
It’s all that you were looking for.
This house responds positively
You need not look at any more.
 
21/07/2009
 
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© 2009 Poeticpiers


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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..