Tricked and mistreated

narrative verse

 

 Tricked and mistreated.

 

I’ve been evicted dispossessed

I was fool did not believe

 I really thought that knew best

and had no fear of all souls eve.

 

To me a jolly holiday

 to trick or treat with all my friends.

But sadly I became the prey

 of evil spirits who intend.

 

To seize the opportunity

Usurp a body take its place

assume again humanity

and thus rejoin the human race.

 

By accident I was alone

 with no one near to offer aid

when I was cast out overthrown.

It was the one mistake I made.

 

To disbelieve was foolishness.

 The legends made it very plain.

So now I am left bodiless

although I can still feel the pain.

 

I’m not the me I used to be

I am not sure just where I am.

 Though all around me I can see

foul spirits who don’t give a damn.

 

 For me and my predicament

They are too busy trying to

 realise their only intent

 of occupying a body too.

 

I’ve been evicted dispossessed

I know too well the tales are true.

I’ll disappear with all the rest

When the sun comes smiling through.

 

I’ll have to suffer 'til next year

Between the worlds in limbo lost.

 Until all souls eve draws near.

For disbelief I pay the cost.

 

Then I’ll be hunting with pack

Seeking an opportunity

 to try and seize my body back.

To be again who I should be.

 

 I would advise you to believe.

 The warning that I offer you

and stay indoors on all souls eve

because the old wives tales are true.

 

13/10/2009

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Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Where oh where do your ideas come from? lol mine are equally as odd .Well belief ibn christiaNITY OR NOT CHRISTMAS IS ONE HOLIDAY THEY WILL STRING U UP FOR FORGETTING AROUND HERE.tHAT IS UNLESS YOU ARE A JEHOVA WITNESS i HAVE A FRIEND WHO IS A WITNESS lOVE THE WAY THE CHRISTIANS COIN PHRASES LIKE WITNESS TESTIFY TYTHING LIKE THEY CANT TELL EACH OTHER FR5OM THE REST OF THE POPULOUS WITHOUT THEM LOL
i FIND IT FACINATING TO SEE HOW THE POPULOUS FOLLOWS CHRISTIANITY AS IF IT WERE DEVINE TRUTH NEVER QUESTIUONING ANYTHING ABOUT IT .THAT WOULD BE A SIN !!!! LOL mAN IF GOD DIDNT WANT ME TO ASK QUESTIONS HE WOULDNT HAVE GIVEN ME A BRAIN AND MADE ME A MAN INSTYEAD OF A SHEEP

[PaleWriter]

That was great Po, I loved the theme you've chosen for this and the way you kept me captivated throughout. You chose your words well and cut out all the unnecssary words. I have been evicted disspossessed was a geat line for repitition of the theme. Very well written indeed.