Was I just spooked?

Was I just spooked?

A Poem by Poeticpiers
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narrative verse

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Was I just spooked?
 
The inner cave was vast in size
with bits of quartz that looked like eyes.
Embedded in the limestone walls.
 
The bits of light reflecting quartz
which made me feel uneasily
 that something was observing me.
 
I had not been in here before
 And do not think I will again.
 A feeling that I can’t explain.
 
I must confess I was afraid
I felt a cold hostility
 as though I was where I shouldn’t be
 
Intruding on the privacy
This made me so uncomfortable
 I left as fast as I was able.
 
When I look back I wonder why
 an empty cave should frighten me
There was nothing I could see.
 
My friends all stayed though I had fled
 explored the pot hole thoroughly
They never tire of teasing me.
 
I always go with my instinct
My subconscious knows more than me
It sees things that the eye can’t see.
 
I gave up speleology
I much prefer the open air
Where I can see all that is there.
 
 To exploring underground
Where really I have no right to be
I think I acted sensibly.
 
24/10/2009
http:// blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers
 
 

© 2009 Poeticpiers


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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..