Eureka! Todays Idiocy.

sily sonnet

 

eureka

 

He stands alone, he has B.O

He has no friends to let him know.

He is supremely ignorant

 that he needs a deodorant.

 

He does not wish to be alone.

But sadly he has never known.

 The fact that he smells so bad

If he was told he would be glad.

 

To take a bath. use aftershave

 in short become a willing slave.

But no one dare get close enough

to tell him all about such stuff.

 

He stands alone he has B.O.

 how very sad he does not know

 

.26/10/2009

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Reviews

[Kieran James McGovern]

This is very funny! The line, "become a willing slave," throws me a bit. I'm reading it over a few times to understand that for myself... clever!

[deeps]

LOL; This is extremely funny here,
So very poetic, like this alot.

[R.R.Louderback]

Hysterical! I really enjoyed this. I refuse to offer any sort of real critique on this one, it was just too much fun!