Nocturnal artistry for M lady Lisette

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Nocturnal artistry

 

The frost adds glitter to the grass.

Which stands erect like silver spears.

Transient beauty which will pass.

The suns rays make them disappear.

Lacy designs on window glass.

More delicate than human art

We’d like to keep them but alas.

WE must accept they will depart.

When morning breaks the sun will rise

Undo the efforts of Jack Frost

 which we expect it’s no surprise.

Though we bemoan the beauty lost.

Tonight Jack Frost will paint again

his patterns on each window pane.

 

Sunday, 13 December 2009

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Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Excellant

[Jasmine]

really incredible...a new favourite. nice work :)

[Phibby Venable]

this has perfect movement and grace..the language is just beautiful and the depth, outstanding!
a joy to read.