Moonlight Mysteries for M'Lady Emma

Experimental form

 

Moonlight mysteries

 

Moonlight.

Deceives our eyes

 creates moving shadows

 which seem to come and go at will.

 

Be still.

 Time ebbs and flows,

 in time the sun will rise

 To banish shadows of the night.

 

By night

 Our eyes tell lies

 because the shadows flow

 fluidly. They are never still.

 

Some will

spring a surprise.

As dawn is drawing close

 they disappear and all is still.

 

Until

 the next moonrise.

Recreating the shadows

Cast by the ruler of the night.

 

Tuesday, 15 December 2009

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Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Funny how you and i can look at something like religeon or darkness and see the blackness without end.While Someone like Emma can see the spirals of the stars and the beauty in a warm summer breeze

[deeps]

This is quite the lovely write here, I like this. Wonderful flow of of words.

[Katrina Mckeown]

A very Interesting well written poem to read with great use of imagery! :-)