P.M.T. For friend Tate

sonnet in tetrameter

 

 

P.M.T

 

Women’s emotions ebb and flow

 a great less predictably.

Than the tides which come and go

 with perfect regularity.

It takes a wiser man than me.

To know if he should sympathise

Or simply let the woman be

And hope that she will realise.

That he still loves her when she’s tense,

Which makes her act unreasonably

 and very quick to take offence..
He does his best to show that he.

Still loves her unconditionally

despite her changeability.

 

Sunday, 13 December 2009

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Reviews

[Amanda Turner]

Lol, I have to say sir you most definitely have a way with words. On that note I should also mention how much I admire your works...I just finished "Establishing a new precendent"...and you'll be happy to know my mother thoroughly enjoyed her Christmas :) Feet up and all!

[Tate Morgan]

Lol I like this Ivor The depths that plumb the female mind will always be a mystery I suppose thats how it ought to be.Because to me to think logically and she to think emotionally .Well its all a big mystery .And now I see!
Tate