What can you lose for M'lady Emma

poem in rhyming quatrains

 

What can you lose?

 

I’ve dreams to spare and dreams to share

For those of you prepared to dare

to leave behind reality

 and try a little fantasy.

 

Although my dreams may not be new.

The promise that I make to you.

My dreams are all in good repair,

 though some have seen a lot of wear.

 

You need not pay my dreams are free

 because they’re low technology.

You do not need a power source

 to view my dreams.Although of course

 

 you must return them when you’re done

and if you’re truly satisfied

Exchange them for another one.

All sorts of dreams can be supplied.

 

Friday, 22 January 2010

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Reviews

[Kyle]

Thank you sir for such a beautiful write.

[Jenny Nelson]

What an exceptionally pleasant piece! A clever write as well.

[Mark]

This is great, Ivor! just a simple, happy, feel-good poem! Thanks!