Waltz time for MY Lady Irene

Waltz time for MY Lady Irene

A Poem by Poeticpiers
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experimental form

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Waltz time

 

I

Hold you

In my arms.

 

We

begin

 a slow waltz

 

One

 two three

 one two three.

 

I

 ask you

 to be mine.

 

You

Agree

 Instantly.

 

We

both knew

without doubt.

 

You

 love me

 I love you.

 

We

 will dance

together.

 

In

 Perfect

 Harmony.

 

As

 we were

meant to do.

 

For

 ever

and a day.

 

Monday, 25 January 2010

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© 2010 Poeticpiers


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Very clever and a great story to go along with the waltz syllable count. This was very uniquely done and I sensed a metaphorical meaning as well. Great job.

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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..