Close friends

sonnet

Close friends?

 

Vampires exist without a doubt.

It’s something which you can check out

Although they are misunderstood.

The do not wish to drink your blood.

It’s on emotions that they feed.

 To satisfy their endless greed,

 like leeches they will cling to you

Attempt to share all that you do.

They do not live merely exist

 it is their nature to persist.

In sharing everything you feel.

If you won’t give then they will steal.

They’ll drain you of your energy.

‘til you expel them forcibly.

 

Thursday, 25 February 2010

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Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

You are not wrong my friend! Family do it too. Mine have been sucking my emotions and I can't expell them quick enough!lol

Is this what they call a subverted sonnet then?

Big smile from

Tai, a not sooooo close friend

[An owl on the moon]

This took quite the turn from what I expected! You've created quite the vivid sonnet that flows with an energy all its own.