Monday morning feeling. for M'lady Emma

sonnet in iambic tetrameter.

 

Monday morning feeling.

 

The eastern sky is pink and gold.

The sun is rising gradually

 from his sojourn beneath the sea

His warmth will replace the night’s cold

The day commences with the dawn.

 Now people rise reluctantly

 to start the day with hot coffee.

Another day that’s newly born.

A working day just like the last

 Although we’d rather stay in bed,

we have to work to earn our bread.

Our time for dreams too quickly passed.

When duty calls we must obey

Endure another boring day.

 

Saturday, 01 May 2010.

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Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This is a beautiful expression of the birth of a new day.. a Monday of all things! And the glimpse of the morning flows so perfectly into this new week.

[A.Lee]

I think you described the Monday morning feeling pretty well. Well formatted & well rhymed.

[Miss Coral]

Nice flow and imagery. Good piece. :)

[The Analog Kid]

Self-explanatory and nicely crafted!