Time out for M lady Poppy

sonnet

 Time out.

 

The fountain murmurs quietly,

in the rose garden in the sun.

 A haven of serenity

 where I relax when work is done.

Inhale the perfume thankfully

It serves to calm my troubled mind.

This is a special place to me.

The only place where I can find

 the peace I need to meditate.

Unwind after a busy day

 and let the perfumes permeate.

To soothe me in their subtle way.

The fountain murmurs quietly,

 its gentle song entrancing me.

 

Wednesday, 09 June 2010-06-09

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Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Beautiful, calming and serene. You penned this sonnet so well! Much enjoyed.

[PaleWriter]

Excellent poem Piers. I can picture the scene you set up so well I can smell the perfume and hear the water. A nice idea and relaxing poem to read. I wish I had a place like that. Nice job.