Is it time yet?

sonnet

 

Is it time yet?

 

Two bright eyes are focussed on me

Transmitting a plea silently.

It must be time I’m sure it is

A little dog’s idea of bliss.

A brisk walk in the open air

with things to sniff at everywhere

 and if I’m lucky to run free.

That suits a little dog like me.

He waits and watches patiently.

Quite sure he’ll win eventually.

When I put on my walking shoes.
he knows for certain he can’t lose

When he fixes his bright eyes on me.

I must surrender gracefully.

 

Monday, 20 September 2010

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Reviews

[luciddreamer]

aww that one makes me miss my little sherlock.....good job :)
Peace
Robin

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aww love it !

[Robin]

you have created a strong visual with these words ~ excellent ~