Absolute Proof.

sonnet

Absolute proof

 

Blood, sweat and tears don’t disappear

But always leave some trace behind.

Forensic science makes it clear

there’s always something we can find

A fibre here or just a hair.

A finger print that you have missed.

All tend to prove that you were there.

The smallest clue can still persist.

You’re sure; you’ll get away Scott free

The evidence says otherwise.

It will prove quite definitely.

Your alibi’s a pack of lies.

The final proof your DNA.

Will prove to you crime does not pay.

 

Wednesday, 22 September 2010

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Reviews

[megalOmaniac]

i think im beginning to understand what u meant by meter.entertaining read.

[DreamingDingledodie]

interesting choice of subject and great sonnet! i always love reading poems on unconventional subjects and this was great!

[Dushyant Thadani]

An Amazing Shakespearen sonnet. Just perfect flow of thoughts and emotions.

[Common Cold]

Sonnets are a very good way to express certain feelings, but I have never seen the form used in this way before. Good job.

[Robin]

you rhyme flawlessy and tell a unique story