Thinking Deeply

rhyming quatrains

Thinking deeply.

 

I find these days quite frequently.

I slip into a semi trance.

When meditating quietly

on fate and changing circumstance.

 

I close my eyes to contemplate

Which seems quite sensible to me.

It leaves me free to concentrate

On what I think not what I see.

 

Of course my wife accuse me

 of napping when I’m in a trance

But she does enjoy teasing me.

A little when she gets the chance.

 

I can’t deny it’s possible

I drop off when I’m comfortable.

But I do not believe I do.

Although my wife insists it’s true.

 

Wednesday, 03 November 2010

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Reviews

[Angel Bird]

Exactly what no-one except writers and artists understand. Oh yes I know about those moments we need, like air to breathe, to escape to our inner world/s...

As always this is one wonderful write, such a great flow and rhythm. It brought a smile to my face.