Mind Control. for friend Dinesh

Mind control

 Pantoum form

 

 

She dreamt a dream within a dream.

A lucid dream she could control

 She chose the pace she chose the theme

In order to achieve her goal.

 

A lucid dream she could control.

 Every detail was designed,

to blend together seamlessly.

Such was the power of her mind.

 

To blend together seamlessly.

A demonstration of her skill.

She succeeded effortlessly.

She exercised her sovereign will.

 

A demonstration of her skill.

Which she had earned by studying

She exercised her sovereign will

By her control of everything.

 

She chose the pace she chose the theme

She dreamt a dream within a dream.

 

Tuesday, 30 November 2010

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Reviews

[Jackson Krauss Blind Pa..]

Hah, that's awesome! Best closing stanza I've seen in quite a while! Really good job!