Dreams fulfilled. For MY Lady Irene

Lain nouveau

Dreams fulfilled

 

Lai nouveau

 

Dreams can come true.

Not all; but some few

Must do

 

Mine did I met you.

Started life anew.

With you.

 

I know you dreamt too.

You were bound to do.

You knew

 

I was meant for you.

That I would be true

 to you.

 

We were meant to be

 in close harmony.

We two.

 

Anyone can see

 you are part of me.

It’s true.

 

I was fancy free

you knew I should be

with you.

 

Married happily.

Our dreams came true.

 Some do.

 

Tuesday, 07 December 2010

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Reviews

[G. K. Bostic]

I love the form; I love the content; Suffice it to say, I love the poem! (And know the truth of it.) ;)

[KAREN]

A nice romantic piece! I felt the love as I read it! Excellent write!

[Poeticpiers]

love pays no attention to age and late blooming love is the best of all

[Dinesh Sairam]

It's amazing how age manipulates the effect of one's thoughts-- even those that're termed to never be changed forever. Shelley (Who's of course was and is the best of romantics), grew a pale, cold-eye towards life and love, towards the end of his life (Which sadly was in a young age of 30!).

I love the

"Our dreams came true.
Some do."

connotation. It's so cool to have irony and oxymoron is such few words.

Keep writing.

[.]

what a delightful, heartwarming read..the rhyme bounces along and is perfect to speak aloud