Another chance to get it right.

just a poem

Another chance to get it right.

 

Looking backwards I can see.

Mistakes I made so easily.

And sometimes wonder where I’d be

 if I had chosen differently.

 

Forced to adapt to circumstance

I did not always have the chance.

To choose a path that would enhance.

 

My future prospect of success

You’re not allowed to second guess

 

There is no way to change the past.

 

I must accept reality

 that I am where I’m meant to be.

 

I’ve known success and failure too.

I did the best that I could do.

I will receive what I am due.

 

The laws of Karma fair and just

will show me what I must adjust.

In them I have the utmost trust

I will obey because I must.

 

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Reviews

[~ Moonlight ~]

One of the most finest poetry, you have done well!

[Rikkevi Rue]

indeed it is so! The real thing to change is always of course the future I suppose... learning from ones experience and all that.

I like the rhyme scheme you use.

[BrynnaW.]

Wonderful rhyme. We all wish we could change the past and have another chance. Good job! Keep writing!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Oh yes...'there is no way to change the past'. True true.
Wonderful rhyme with a kick-butt message.

Excellent!