Mind your own business

Trifall

Mind your own business.

 

We dream of love,we cant resist

We dream by night and broad daylight

Sheer delight

We won’t share. we do not dare

It is our right

To maintain our privacy

Dreaming our dreams secretly

 

Though publically we still insist

We can sleep in peace each night

Though you might

Well argue , It isn’t true.

You could be right

But we still adamantly

Choose to sit tight.

 

Your pleas are easy to resist

Though you try without respite

We still fight

your attempts meet with contempt

We refuse to bite

We can’t be fooled so easily

Though you think we might.

 

Wednesday, 21 September 2011

http:// blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers

 

Reviews

[Greg the Bard]

This one is very different as your work goes. It seems to be in the third person using the "We" instead of "I". I like it and believe it doesn't take away from the thought. Great work!