Life is not fair

Scarlet dragon form. Another form to play with

Scarlet Dragon form

 

8 lines

Syllable count 12.12.3.3.3.3,.12.12

Rhyme pattern aa bb cc dd.

 

Life isn’t fair.

 

Escaping from reality I fantasise.

About a secluded tropical paradise.

Made for two.

Me and you,

Anywhere

you prefer.

But you don’t share my fantasies .You do not care.

But I still dream although I know: life is not fair.

 

Monday, 31 October 2011

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Reviews

[Myenigma]

'life is not fair' a hard lesson to teach..

[Donald Meikle]

I like the work but contradict you sir. Life for me has always been fair some times even better than good.Sometimes bad but compared to death fair to middlin'

[Greg the Bard]

Well said and profound to the limit of our minds delight. Great write.