Piercing the veils of mystery

Sonnet of sorts

Piercing the veils of mystery.

 

Some understand instinctively.

What must remain a mystery

To the vast majority

Of ignorant humanity.

Most just accept the Status Quo

Because they do not want to know.

Although a few an elite few

Will learn things that they never knew

By dint of hard experience

They have to learn in self defence

Although their progress may be slow.

They can’t forget once that they know

How to interpret what they see

Piercing the veils of mystery.

 

Sunday, 04 December 2011

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Reviews

[emmajoy]

There are words that can only be said by experience, there are words that can only be understood by living. Seems your beautiful words come from a spirit that understands what other people let pass by.

Fine work, superbly put - as always, dear friend.

[Dinesh Sairam]

The likeliness of beautifully rhymed and musically woven poems are decreasing at a slow rate in WC. So, it's very refreshing to see poems like this now and then- The kind of poems that flow without interruption and rhyme in the most subtle of ways.

The most interesting aspect is the experience of human years put in the poem (There are very few who do so- Tate Morgan, coyotepoetry and other few). They alone add the melancholy to the whole verse. Thanks for writing this.

And for God's sake, Keep writing.