Somber Excuses
A Poem by Taylor<3
Tell me why,
Explain the reason,
to be
so
morose,
somber,
melancholy,
sad.
Awful
attachment
to
indifferent
feelings.
Dragging
down
what
sanity
you
had.
Change
your
vision
releash
those
thoughts,
and
in
the
end
you'll
see....
Sadness
isn't
comforting;
better
to
be
happy.
© 2008 Taylor<3
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I liked your sentiments, but I'm a little confused as to why you chose to space it out the way you did. Personally I found it a little distracting.
Posted 17 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 19, 2008
Author
Taylor<3Valdosta, GA
About
My name is Taylor i'm 14 years old.
I'm a Leo.
My fave color is Velvet Blue the color of my room.
I've been writing poetry for 2yrs. as a hobby mostly.
I mostly listed to music (rock/alternative) and.. more..
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