A Place of Peace

This was written on 11/7/12, I finished writing it at 12:12pm. I almost chuckled as I wrote it.

A place of peace,
Would my mind survive there?
I think I would be bored,
Just sit down and die there

I much prefer,
The torrents of life
piecing together
The stress and strife

It's a constant puzzle
Always turning new leaves
So why would I want
A place of peace?

Author's Note

See why I thought this amusing? please ignore grammar

Reviews

[}Echo{]

This is... Interesting.. I like it. It's different. Your style of writing is very unique. It's not like a repeat of everyone elses writing like a lot of people's writing is. I really enjoy reading your writing, because it's different, and has a darker theme to it. Keep writing, please! :))