Ultimate Experience

Hearts thumping

Hands clapping

Voices Screaming

Music Starts

Lights dim

FLASH!

Stage lights up

And on come the stars

We've been waiting for

This my friend

Is the ultimate experience

Maybe the best moment of our lives...

Author's Note

If you don't get it it's a concert!

Reviews

[We are young.]

Cool this is exactly how I would take a concert, there so awesome wish I could go to one.

[Kameron Armitage]

It was pretty good, but I've seen you do better:) If you just added som stronger, more emotional wrod, you've got it. Keep it up!