Addicted

I'm so addicted to you

You shouldn't know that's true

I hide all the feelings that keep me alive

To go and ponder to love and to strive

I shouldn't have to fight to win your heart

I shouldn't have to trip and fall so hard

I'm addicted to the way your eyes sparkle

I'm addicted to the way you tackle

I love the way you hold me

So close my head lies to the heart of thee

To hear the slight 'thump' that keeps me going

I know it's there and it's mine for the holding

I love the way you love me

Every single day

I love the way you look at me

As if I were the ocean's bay

To love, is to hold

And you win that hands down

You play those cards seven fold

You're the prince that holds the crown

You have the key to my fragile heart

Keep it close and we'll never fall apart

I'm addictied to the way you move

The way you jump at any feeling

The way you always have to prove

The things that keep me reeling

I can't be sad when you're around

I cannot shed a tear

It's impossible to fall so hard to the ground

When you're standing there

 

Reviews

[Aekmy]

I love the ending!
'It's impossible to fall so hard to the ground
When you're standing there'

And also I like these lines,
'You play those cards seven fold
You're the prince that holds the crown'

You also have veryy good punctuation and there are no spelling errors. Good job. :D

Beautiful darling, wondrous!
Have a good rest of the day! (I hope you don't get irritated by that because I like reviewing your stuff.)
(:

[We are young.]

This was very sad but sweet at the same time, I love how all the words seem to fall into place with your poems, but have a exact meaning, and every word adds to the poem like a final touch.

[Jade Mayhew]

Awww, this is such a cute poem! I loved it so much! If this is about a legit person, like if it's not just a made up person, I really hope things are working out for you! This is incredibly well-written. :]]]