Fight Fire With Fire

You can't fight fire with fire

You'll just end up burned

Your every whim and every desire

Takes a drastic turn

Your dreams and wishes

Get thrown away

Down the drain

And in the ditches

Lost into forever

There's nothing you can do

But crawl around and shiver

And lose your closest crew

You can't fight fire with fire

You'll just end up burned

Your every whim and every desire

Taking it's last turn

Reviews

[NightsShade]

Haha, I liked this poem. Great work! I liked how you went back to the first three lines and repeated them. And then changed the meaning of the last line. It had a great affect and impact. I have to agree with Octavia, the first line captured my attention as well.
Keep on writing!!!!

[We are young.]

This is quite good, you cant fight fire with fire. This first line immediatley got me intrested in what the poem was about. Fantastic work!

[Aekmy]

I like the way this rhymes. Well done once again. (: