I would if I could

Its about understanding that you can't change the past

If i could give a name
for fate

 

I would be twisted all the same

 

If i could live another moment

 

I would wish for one-thousand more

 

If i thought there
Was a chance
For redemption

 

I would spend all my time on that

 

But its not there
I couldn't care

 

Its all the same

Never ending
every year

 

 

 

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Amen^^

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol that it is that it is :-)

[kublakhan27]

lol :)

[Castonovia]

Powerful meaning with such small yet fluid and smoothly rounded words, deep in a way... love the brilliant capturing of truth, well penned indeed :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

You know me I am the harbringer of truth. I like writing in a way that is both powerful but also fluid and simplistic in a way that ppl of all ages can understand and enjoy. A large vocabulary is all well and good but at a point it subtracts from your work and will do naught but limit your audience. at least that is my opinion.

[Castonovia]

Mine as well: short, but sweet is my thinking, very well done... definitely captured this audience ;p

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

YAY!!!! mission accomplissed ;-D

[Steven Cash]

Bravo

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanks :-D

[Aehr]

very deep.. and to the point.. and meaningful.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much! :-)