Black Panther

a short poem about my favorite animal the black panther PLZ READ!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The black night

 

Comes and goes

 

It stalks its prey 

 

Looming darkness

 

It surrounds you

 

Encircles you

 

Smells of its home and ancestors

 

When hunger has come

 

It flexes its paws in anticipation

Reviews

[Zahra]

liked this poem, very nice and well penned

[corvus]

Cool and well written =) I love this concept; it's short and sweet but drums the point home. Just with the "it's prey", you don't need the apostrophe and it's the same with "flexes it's paws" =)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

its my favorite animal :-)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

oh and neat little fun fact it was an english assighnment from english my freshman year it prob has some official pattern or rhythm he asighned I forget lol I just found it in an old school folder

[corvus]

oh ahhaa nice

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

:-D

[♥ Kinnixk]

Cool :)