Blind Irony

A poem about a small girl experienceing blindness and how it effects her outlook. Its about taking things for granted, loss, and appreciation. its a good read so try it out! :-)

 

 

 

Little one
In meadow green
Hides her eyes
Of amazing sheen
Soon they fade
And turn blank white
So now her world
Is only night
Feather blindfold
Flutters down

While she crawls
Upon the ground
She gazes sun-ward
Like a dream
From Pearly eyes
Comes a quiet
Crystal stream

Reviews

[lyricalprince]

wonderful beautiful amaxing poem great read!

[Living_Memories]

This is such a beautiful poem.

[Cyndi Goodgame]

Great poem. I really like this.

[Saumya]

reallllllllly wonderful......!!!!!
great work....!!!!
very very well done....!!!
:)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thank you glad you think so

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed..!!!!
:)

[Ezekiel Silver]

Unique poem. I like how well you express blindness and how well the imagery is. Nice work.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

why thank you :-) I do try and keep things interesting

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This has been beautifully throughout, well done

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thank you :-) it's a personal favorite of mine as well

[Akira]

I really do enjoy this. Your writing is always gorgeous.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy it :-D

[Akira]

You're welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very sad, but she sounds pretty tough...she will adapt...the youth are often stronger than we give them credit for being.

jacob

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Too true

[Wórdsmíth]

That's totally amzin', your ink's damn nice, wonderful words in each n every line...awesome really, your writin' language's so much effective n efficient as well, just touched me from inner your this writin'.
good luck 4 you next writin'....don't say you're a professional writer ??lol

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm serious I'm not a pro I'm just an ordinary high school girl. This is a piece close to my heart so I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.

[S.R. Madeline]

I like the flow and the language, very good!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

than k you S.R. I'm glad you enjoyed it