Cold Feet

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.

This is about a woman who is getting married but wasn't ready for it.

Clink goes the glass

Chandelier so clear

Reflecting pure propriety

And in glistening eyes

Pure fear

Diamonds on the fingers

Dresses all in lace

Hide the "I do" fear

Hidden in the face

Fear blushes up her cheeks

They say "Wedding bliss"

The devel contract is signed

With an after "I do" kiss

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.

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I really like this one...the imagery and structure are spot-on^^

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13 Years Ago

No problem, you've pulled off that effect wonderfully :)

13 Years Ago

Yay!! I always do enjoy a sucess :-D

13 Years Ago

:D

Very nice

I just wonder about the whole meaning and reason for writing

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on October 5, 2012
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Emily Dickinson Jr.

FL

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..