Dream Crushers

wrote this in science class

Imagination sucked from them

when they're young

they take away all you're fun

 

They walk around and crush your dream

no matter how happy or big

they may seem

because it brings them joy

to disappoint every little girl and boy

 

Your dreams are sacred

but only to you

according to them

it's just like the flu

 

So hold your dreams

keep them close

before they give you a heavy dose

of the dreamless world

Author's Note

sorry the ending sucks couldn't think of a good one

Reviews

[Ashli The Amazing]

i like it the whole thing none of it sucked ^_^ job well done

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Well written Julie!
But am still intrigued with "before they give you a heavy dose
of the dreamless world"

[Krystal Nicole]

A very storngly written and relateable poem. Nic job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I relate to it very much. Nice work!

[KAREN]

Written well with great flow! A good relateable poem!

[Short.Nerd]

I like it. This happens a lot in the world. Great job:)

[Daydreamer54]

I like this and it's so true that there are haters out there who want to tear you down,but you have to have perserverence! very inspiring write! ^^