wisp

I don't see,

I don't hear, 

I don't speak.... 

I close down to float within my own mind, 

I become a wisp, a shadowy veil of thought,

but in this form I find a world,

one without any barriers,

with out discrimination as all are the same, 

We become sexless,

colorless,

just a wisps of shadows that flow,

in and round each other,

that slowly form together as one mass to pray for the rising sun...

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

You interpret this nicely in the lines...as you transform in the verse as just a figment of vapor and take form and explain to us the feeling of a whole new concept of mind and body in a state of wonder...