do you love me?

do you love me? when you say it there is some kinda loook in your eye ? its like your hideing something 

is there some one else ? i need to know ! its killing me i need to know !

Author's Note

im not good at it but i like to do it for something to do i came on this site to improve my writeing skills so people help me ?

Reviews

[Praiser]

Write from your spirit and not from your feeling sometime the heart can betray, be your self and let the words flow from out you where God live
Let him write out you, to be the best of the best there only one you

[Crazy Cat Man]

my advice is to keep reading. writing is like a muscle you have to use it. but if your stuck. just keep reading :) that should help

[Zaniriah]

You have to start some where. It's not bad just would like to see a little more. Goodluck

[Brookypoo]

This is ok...the more the better.

[violetta york / nicki e..]

this is good for a beginning. :)
maybe try adding more, and checking grammar/spelling/punctuation/etc. good luck!

[rihanna]

yeaaa !