Diaboli.

Negative vibes always strong because human always fall for bad thing many of the times. Don't let it be permenant drug to stay alive. It may let you stay alive but never let reach your destination.

I'm in a voyage.
The journey has begun.
As I move colour is visible.
Blue sea is beautiful.
Days gone in joyousness,
and a little turbulances I feel.
It's sea not a lake ofcourse.
One day suddely a change.
There is a storm in sea.
A huge one I never see.
I'm alone in this disaster.
afraid of it and dark.
Waiting for some help.
Praying God and ramble on
help, help, help please.
I find nothing but sea change.
Tired, helpless fall asleep.
Bright sunrays wake me up.
Dark's gone, it's light morning.
Sea is as calm as it was before.
Still the fear is reside in me.
Someone is hailing hand.
May be the person's in trouble
or in needed of help.
I let the person embark in.
Days are passing, I'm feeble.
Why I'm not getting a coastline?
I asked the person, why?
The person changed to diaboli.
It's vibes are stronger than I.
Rascally it laughs at me.
It made unable to fight.
I find strengh to kick it out.
I fight harder and won it over.
Finally I find a land.

Reviews

[Happy hours]

this is an amazing piece of writing...great :)

[Prabha Salimath]

thank you Anshul.

[Matching Socks]

Really like the message in this piece and the wave of emotions in the journey.
Nice job Prahba.

[Prabha Salimath]

Thank you Ana for an insightful review.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Great msg
your description of sea is so nice,, I like reading it as you have written so well

[Prabha Salimath]

Thank you Hardeep.

[Frieda P]

The sentiment shines through, good read, why all the periods, not necessary. Well done Prabha.

'Rascally it laughs at me'....love that line.

[Prabha Salimath]

Thanks you Frieda, yes negativity is nothing but a rascal.

[Leigh]

Love your references to the sea, it has so much to draw from and is a landscape all of its own, from which you have painted a beautiful picture. Nice ending.

[Prabha Salimath]

thank you Leigh for the review.

[anne]

great.....I loved the description and final touch....so well structured.....with every new write you are coming with something splendid.....keep penning.... :))

[Prabha Salimath]

Thanks for such reinforcing words Shivedita.