Banished

Can't be too long
For I shall find
I shall redeem
Yes there was a time, when curtain embraced the simplicity
There were instances when someone peeked right thru
Lost are those sunlight lancing inside
Lost are those winds of banners pushing me back
Nevertheless, I was, I am and will be forever
As long as eternity loses upon itself.....................

Reviews

[Kaitlyn]

I'm honestly not sure if I understand this one. But you wrote it, and I'm sure that it means something to you, which is what matters.

Regardless, the flow was very well executed. : )

Good job.

[John F Carver]

I don't understand it at all.

[Mary Christabel George]

Deepankar...This was just awesome.
So short but so very powerful.

[Ency Bearis]

Interesting poem