Death...

One moment here
and the next moment death cloaks you..
No wonder that is the destination
where life leads to..

Like a passionate lover
the grave awaits you..
Leaving no clue
away it takes you..

Reviews

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

i loved it very much :):)

[prajakta]

thankyou harpreet:-)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your welcome g:)

[Rajat malik]

Yeap!!! u r right....time doesn't care for anyone.... Certainly right and I liked it :)

[prajakta]

thankyou for the review:-)

[Rajat malik]

You pleasure

[Rajat malik]

you are welcome

[Rajat malik]

sorry for 'you pleasure' comment..... I was thinking about something else

[prajakta]

dats okay:-)

[Abilash Uttama]

death is our ultimate destination but as they say journey is important not it's end, so we should make the most of it. Nice poem !

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

u r absolutely write g

[prajakta]

yaa true.thankyou for stopping by:-)

[E G TEN]

Death has always been underrated
Until that very exact moment
Like a passionate lover...
He'll swept you off your feet

See I'm learning :) Thanks for sharing, always :-)

[prajakta]

hahaha..thanks fr reading:-)and as always please keep reviewing:-)

[Ayank Chourasia]

death is inevitable inevitable inevitable nothing more to say...enjoyed the poem :D

[prajakta]

thanks for stopping by:-)..please keep reviewing.

[Ayank Chourasia]

Yup teach me stuff too

[Pushkar Prabhat]

death deserves some love too.......
beautiful dedication here..........
loved the simplicity and brevity..........just like death.....
amazing poem....
i loved it!!!
:)

[prajakta]

thankyou so much Pushkar..:-)ur reviews are always encouraging:-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

always a pleasure..........!!! :) :)