HOPE

HOPE is a short poem which tells us to never lose faith whatsoever because god always has something planned for us.

When dreams are shattered,

When you feel all is lost,

Don't feel dejected,

Don't lose hope at any cost.

Life is not a bed of roses,

It has its ups and downs.

We should learn to accept failures,

And not meet them with frowns.

So what if you have not achieved,

What was to be your aim.

There is no need to feel sorry,

There is no need to feel shame.

Man writes his own destiny,

So don't lose hope as yet.

Come on! Buckle up and work harder,

Dont sit there and fret.

If things don't turn out the way you want,

Don't let that spoil your mood,

Because you must remember one thing :

WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR YOUR GOOD!

Author's Note

do you agree with this view? How many of you have actually come across such a situation?

Reviews

[Hope]

I agree with you completely! The cliche that I've always heard and sadly used myself was "life will never be easy," it speaks for itself. Now on the structure of it, you had a great rhyme scheme of ABCB and then in the last stanza I understand that the content of it was still very poetic and expressive of your emotions. It seems that you knew just what you wanted to say in that last stanza and were excited to write it down; if so, I would advise to write down what first comes to mind and then later go back and try to keep it with the same rhyme scheme. Otherwise, it was a very convincing poem and I really enjoyed reading this.

[Cupid Heart]

I love this!!! I think it’s very true and encouraging!! Great job!!!! :D

[karthik]

I like it.
What ever that happened in life, feel it like a droplet of water because we have an ocean of life to live
Good thoughts

[Govind singh]

I think everyone feels it at sometime...isolated....life is like a body and ups and downs r virus...the only antidote is hope...hope for the best and do ye best...:)

[Anjali]

Yes, I totally agree with you Prateeksha! Whenever we feel dejected, it is that time when God has planned something better for us and all we have to do is BELIEVE.

[Taz]

I loved this, it is so empowering and beautiful, It really lifts a person up and makes them have a real need to see the happy that comes out of life and this poem is definately portraying it well, I love how you say life has it's ups and downs because it really does, amazing job.

[Sushravya (Vidhisha)]

I have!
But then most of us have come across this!
Inspirational as it was ,the more meaning it revoked

[Aniil P]

Exactly what I needed to read / hear currently. Its strange how the same thing makes more sense in tougher times.

[WriterGirl101]

I loved this. Definitely a positive poem.
And it is totally true... :)

[GreenShoes]

Hi, I'm brand new here and this is the first thing I've read and my first review on Writers Cafe (though I've done lots on Wattpad!) I like this poem, I like your way of thinking, and I like your About Me. I'm not used to this rating and points system, so please forgive me for not knowing what to do. I will be back to read more of your work. :)

[Alex Cook]

I would like to post this my site with your permission. Let me know. The site address is
http://alexdeancook.wix.com/cooksworld-sci-fi