TOO LATE

A Story by Prateeksha Khot

What would you do if you had everything except TIME to save your loved one....

Just then she reached the spot. But it was too late......

© 2010 Prateeksha Khot

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Prateeksha Khot

This is for the 10 word story contest

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sssssssaaaaaadddddddddddd

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really touching

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was great. and perfect picture to go with it

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is powerfull. The imagery with it tells a big story in a short 10 words. Nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Those ten words were 10 powerful words.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 12, 2010

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Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India

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A happy-go-lucky rebel, i like doing things my way : that is the different way. I am creative and like trying out new stuff : There's hardly anything in which I am not interested. Plus point ? : I HAV.. more..