Love

"When love in hearts reign
Difficult otherwise to feign

It will find its way to flow
To those, deserving a glow"

Reviews

[Kady R.]

Such a wonderfully written poem short but definitely with a punch to it!!!

I love how you related love yo a flow and also to getting a glow. I didn't think about that but there is a flow to love!! Thanks for this insightful poem Prema!!

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks for sharing this short but deep write about love..:)

#we can all appreciate the emotions of love that you write about here.

I like the final two lines.....it will find it's flow, to those deserving a glow....

BB73

[prema]

Thanks for reading and reviewing

[Richard🖌]

Beautifully shared, Prema 💛

From hearts as pure as gold,
love shines ever-so bold!
Oh-yes, when love reigns true,
its honesty shines, too.

Your spot-on rhymes, rhythm, and flow carry forth heartfelt emotions to your grateful fans … those like me. : )
One wee hint for L1: add an "s" to "heart reign" = "hearts reign". One "heart" reigns, "hearts" reign.

I deeply enjoy, Dear Poetess, how your words speak so wonderfully sweet! ⁓ Richard🖌

[prema]

You made me happy by your review. Also thankyou for the suggestion on line 1. Love prema

[prema]

What I mean is correcting me on line 1

[Richard🖌]

Always, Prema, it is my pleasure to share with you … now, to see if you use my suggestion. ; )