In My Soul

To spill ones feelings is that right When we wright must be right

There is peace in my soul
for such a long period of waiting

You are in my life love, love
melody and rhyme

My Lord you took hold of my heart

I know that any achievement as say
Destiny took my heart to a level
but could achieve

You have the soul of the sea
of my soul my heart my dreams
of a man i can not truly hear

You may only once in a lifetime
to take hold so fast to be a
commitment of love that huge

You will live eternally in my life
The goddess we know your
meant for me

To phoenix to u-no-le

Love, love holds you so
my dear Andrea
I really hope you do not
get a broken heart.

Reviews

[John Preston]

I'm not to bothered about grammar. If it flows it flows rightly or wrongly.
Thanks.

[Rose of many colours]

Nice I enjoy this piece, I cannot correct grammar, i read for the essence of the story, cause every lines of the written , spoken and unwritten and unspoken words have meaning to flavour our lives.