Soul

It is about owning ones own Soul.

I have read in a book,
my soul is not mine

When I lay on my bed
taking my last breath

Someone called God
Seems, it be longs to him

Well listen here mate
you can think again

For I am free of “Will”
my “Soul” is surely mine

A “Spirit” in me
its super young “Cool”

No one can “Take”
No one can “Give”

It is in nature, “Free”
for me - we are
nobody’s slave - see

I do no one’s bidding
I am not kidding

You can say what you like
before I depart

My “Soul” will have gone
with “Spirit Free”

To a realm of light
you bet, that is so right

 

 

 

 

It also states my “Soul”
is immaterial and is
Emotional a part of man.

And commands one’s
“Soul” to God.

I don’t believe you man
my “Soul” is mine, mine only

It’s very special important
to me

Tis more than words can say
tis who I am, how I behave
my “LIFE”

They are, built in; seed of beginning
over seeing my engine, running “FREE”

I believe my “Spirit” comes and
goes as i sleep

Where to, I do not know
not really bothered

As it always comes back to me,
you see its “FREE”. Travels at “WILL”

Their like the sunlight- moon night
Take batteries, a positive, a negative
you cannot have one without the other

They are not good or bad
but they are always together

A spark in the heart a glitter the eye
some how somewhere
theirs a door no key

We are “FREE” sometime
to pass, say goodbye.

 

One can believe in what
one wishes
we are Individual
Free Soul, Free Spirit, and Free Will

I do not ask anyone to believe
in me
Please do not tell me believe in you

What is true is blue in the sky
for my eyes to wonder the starry night
their i see, a twinkling star.

That is so true.

 

 

 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

well, now... What a concept you have here.. This is a pretty touchy subject where I am from.. down here in the bible belt people want to shove their opinions down your throat and think for you.. these words hit home for me...

"I do not ask anyone to believe
in me
Please do not tell me believe in you"....... wish more people felt like that down here..

We have our own hearts, spirits, minds to learn, grow, experience, have faith in what we want to believe without other people wanting to judge or to ostracize due to those beliefs... We are individual and should make up our own minds as to what we want to do with our lives.. We should be able to respect each other regardless... very well stated sir...

[John Preston]

Yes AprilRN1210 ( by the way is that your Cloths size . lol) I believe we are all equal, man or woman. I don't care where one comes from. We all live on the same planet. Just one world.
One people. But other things get in the way.

[Rene Salinas]

It really got me how it twisted and turned in order to explain itself. There is a certain naievty of youth too which makes it light and approachable. I think it will defeat the point to stamp any credo onto this as placing a value will be certainly getting in the way of the writing. It is fast and it demands nothing (at least from me) other than enthusiasm and a bit of humour and maybe, maybe for a few mintues while you a reading get rid of anything that doesn't let you be free.

Very enjoyable.

Thankyou

[Matching Socks]

Great write John and I loved how you have wrapped it up.
Some deep soulful thoughts in this for sure and such strength of character.

[John Preston]

Thank you Ance. I saw red when I read that in the book. How dear they, but that's how they con the unknowing.