Winner

just a simple poem on how rough life can be sometimes...

You cry yourself to sleep at night thinking about that

thing called life

Knowing it's not good nor bad somehow it's less

happy but sad

Figuring out how to make things right knowing it's

a hell of a fight

Determined to get it back together even if it

takes forever

Asking GOD to make a path to follow and get back

on track

Focusing on the positive not negative, praying for a

better perspective

Wanting to succeed but fail

ONE DAY YOU KNOW YOU SOON WILL PREVAIL......

Reviews

[Tom]

I admire the spirit displayed here, we all get are fair share of knocks in life but this poem encourages us to get back up again and go for it !

Spiritually uplifting, well penned indeed !

[Jeannear]

thank you I really appreciate that comment it means a lot to me

[Joyce S. Greene]

Keep your chin up and you will succeed. Life can be hard but it's all in the attitude. Keep smiling and life will smile back at you. Your poem ends on a positive note and you leave the reader hoping, along with you, that things are going to get better. Write on!

[Jeannear]

thank you so much