impurity is worse than a sin

the practice of lesbians

what's this?
you think being with someone of the same sex,will help you,or will understand you more?!nope that's wrong,you have mistaken friendship for love.
being in love with the same sex,
you may be satisfy,you may be happy,but let's wake up from our long nap,dont let civilisation destroy us,love is not like that,it does not live with shame for happiness,but uses its(love)happiness to wipe the shame,do you think you can do that, we all love you,even if we dont show,you are still humans like us,you can say you are in love,but this love is not right.

Reviews

[lightflower14]

thanks@ally the cat i will work on the advice you gave.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

I love the portray of ignorance displayed in this poem, it is naive and full of an angry passion as displayed by the punctuation used.

The use of English is poor and there are far too many spelling mistakes which I think works in this piece as it demonstrates the lack of education portrayed by the homophobic character.

The last line is a little hard to make sense of particularly " wipe the shame,do you think you can do that, we all love you,"

I enjoy how the first and second line conflict with one another, confused and outraged with the opening question and then an instant like "expert" statement on how and why gay relations occur.

I'm assuming the "we" is a religion? So therefore the poem is going on to say that the religions point of view is trying to come to terms with something they believe is wrong by loving them anyway however can not help but discriminate and degrade them by referring to the lesbians in a derogatory manor "you are still humans like us".

This ends as well as it begins "but this love is not right." Very opinionated and close minded overall a fantastic piece of literature I think it should be published in the newspaper to show true homophobic individuals how ridiculous their views look on paper keep up the great work!

[The Brazilian Poet]

Dear Lightflower, first: thank you for accepting my friendship request! A great pleasure to me. Second: yes, you are totally right! First we have to consider what love is. Love is a deep feeling that we send towards another person, maybe a man, maybe a woman. We can find this type of love in the biblical David and Jonathan, the son of Saul: they loved each other deeply, but they didn't go to the bed to make sex! Love is not sex! Sex in just an instinct! Which must be directed to someone of the other sex! Because this is natural! What the gays feel is not love, but depravity! A nonsense! And we can also find love between a man and a woman which is expressed through sexual relationship! Normal, healthy, desirable! Don't give up of your thought: you are right - yes!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A hard subject to write about. Right and wrong. Who decide? Love don't have boundaries. When love comes. Can't be stopped. I liked the poetry. Open the door to the questions of life each of us must face. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lightflower14]

actually i felt pathetic to this gay and lesbian case and at the same time sympathetic.