my days with you are now memory.

death!oh death!i curse you death,the one that took my beloved,i chose not to believe you're gone,because no matter where i am,i feel your presence,my nose is crazy,that smells your scent everywhere,my eyes keep deceiving me,into seeing you everyday,though you are gone,but i can still feel you everywhere but cant find you.

Reviews

[lightflower14]

thanks junique.I really appreciate it.

[Junique]

I know the feeling. A very moving poem. Emotions were expressed in very good detail. Very ggod read

[lightflower14]

thanks for your advice and comment i really appreciate it.

[The Brazilian Poet]

You must go into a poetical group here to participate of some competition!

[The Brazilian Poet]

According to my point of view, what you write it is a wonderful poetic prose! Arthur Rimbaud made it with excellence! Go ahead because you write very well : your future is guaranteed in the literary world! 100

[several thousand]

great piece of writing. you have done well expressing the anguish of loved one.

[Tomoe Tellez]

This is a good poem you have here. I do advise you to apply structure, your poem is worth it.

[lightflower14]

I want review from other writers

[lightflower14]

I want review from other writer